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Mon Aug 25, 2008, 4:57 PM
this is my home
where my heart was torn out
where I had my first kiss
and the first prickling of doubt
took hold

let it unfold
and surround
under a violet sky

and each passing stop light
reminds me
of everything
I thought I could not be
but won't you look at me now?
my hands on the wheel
with a song on my lips
in harmony
with the stereo
and the dream reeling
ahead of me
bounding
nimble in the headlights

let it unfold
and surround
under an indigo sky

my heart is breaking
with the lines on the road
each one
a mark of a thought
touched upon
and let go
free to escape
into the jungle of the night
but this time
the chains
are on me and mine
tied to tomorrow
and I resign
to look ahead

let it unfold
and surround
under a dark sky

just know

that I'll miss this


this moment now

let it unfold

  • Listening to: The Boy Who Blocks His Own Shot - Brand New

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:iconlambs2ndseal:
why do you never post these as deviations?

Even your journal, what should be a repository of random thoughts, is filled with poetic structure

You are amazing.

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:iconquette:
Flatterer. :P

I have the odd journal entry that's just random babbling. I usually post poems here that I don't really like, but are true to the moment of what I'm thinking/feeling.

I don't really know what I feel about this particular piece though.

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